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2007-09-10 [J] Finishing Honey Coming

_ 積みゲーHoney Coming消化

ま、らいどー先生のお見合い３０回だっけ？失敗話とか

思いっきり此方にダメージが来ましたが、

とりあえず一通り終わりました。

悪くないんだけど、自分にとってものすごく違和感がある世界観でした。

主人公が「こんな学校嫌じゃーとか騒いでいる」のですが、極めて同感。

キャラはそこそこ立っています。

あえて変な学校にする必要があるのかなぁ、別にここまでする必要はなくてキャラ同志の相互関係で美味く話を作れたのではないかなぁ、と最後まで思ってしまいました。

結局世界観の違和感のためにお話にのめり込めなかったかなぁ。

コメントとしては、幼なじみは最後に取っておけ、かな？

_ 山猫さん帰宅

山猫さん（イオ）が修理から帰ってきました。中古パーツといっていたのですが、何も違和感がありません。キズもほとんど無かったし。

車が無いと食料調達に苦心するのをこの数日で思い知らされました。

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